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Sarah and Harold


Today I want to talk about Alicia's mother, Sarah, and her husband Harold.


Yes, I picked Amanda Seyfried as Sarah. Pretty, isn't she?

Sarah of Tremayne married Harold of Mattix when she was fourteen, and he seventeen. Alicia was born two months shy of Sarah's seventeenth birthday. Darius was plotting some funny business in the Lun Forest, and so it was only natural he would choose Alicia's mother from a woman living in the surrounding area. However, Sarah's not just any pretty young womanshe's the granddaughter of Prince Piran, the youngest son of Emperor Myghal. Emperor Trevelyan is actually Sarah's second cousin. Now, I don't know about you, but it seems like a pretty big coincidence that the emperor's second cousin just "happened" to meet Harold in Strider, just "happened" to fall in love with him, and he just "happened" to live on the edge of Lun Forest, where Darius is hiding out.

I think Mister Czuchry would make a good Harold, don't you?

I understand that I'm the author, so I should technically have all the answers, but I honestly only just discovered this weird little coincidence. And really, what better choice for Darius was there than the emperor's second cousin? If something were to happen to the rest of the royals, that would put Alicia in quite a good position. But Darius has a little problem, doesn't he? Strider's not a puddle jump away from Lunit's a really long-ass journey, especially for someone like Harold. And speaking of Harold, what in the world do we know about him? Is it just coincidence that he's "all that's left" of his own family? We know he's some kind of farmer, and apparently an inventor of sorts. He's absolutely dirt poor, and a bit of a coward. But what are we thinking; is he a good guy, or a bad guy?

Let's think about this. What we know about Lun Province is that it is "normally green and beautiful," according to Mal in chapter one. In chapter two we find out that Lun in Harvest Moon (August) is usually "abundant with bright red tomatoes, green lettuce, miles and miles of wheat, yellow grass, apple trees, and a ridiculous amount of wildflowers." Now, it's dead, dry, barren, without even any grass or trees, save the forest. The forest, too, concerns Mal and Warwing. It seems to emanate a kind of darkness that it never had before. Lun Forest has always been a forest of mystery and secrets, but it never posed harm to anyone unless they sought the Lake and were impure. Now it's nesting giant ants with a clearly killer instinct. What we don't know is how long Lun has looked this bad, and how much the ants really have to do with it. My guess is it's been looking bad for over ten years. News is surprisingly slow, or maybe no one really even paid much attention. Maybe Darius was working an even bigger net of influence than we realize -- who knows?

Now let's think about Harold, and his situation. He was living in his "little hovel," as Sarah calls it, when she married him, so it may be the house he himself grew up in. We don't know what happened to Harold's family, or if they were even alive when he met Sarah. All we know is the place is a dump, and considerably less than what Sarah was used to. But Sarah loved Harold, so she didn't complain.

This brings up another question: What mother lets their fourteen-year-old daughter marry some random dude who lives on the other side of the West Empire and then move all the way over there? I know I wouldn't. Alicia points out in chapter 28 that fourteen is considerably young, even in a world where humans marry and die young, especially in rural areas. We don't really know what Alicia considers "young," but based on other humans we've seen, the trend seems to be that they marry anywhere between their late teens to their mid-twenties. And what in the world was Harold doing in Strider, anyway? Sarah said he was there "partly for work and partly with friends," and that they met "rather on accident" (ch28). I wasn't raised on a farm, but I'm pretty sure farmers don't generally travel across the country for work, especially poor farmers who can barely sustain a house or buy new clothes. Also, in a rural area like Mattix, it seems sort of strange for Harold to have friends that live so far away. Maybe they used to live in Mattix and moved, and he was going for a visit, or maybe they were in the process of moving and he was assisting them. We're assuming Harold probably traveled from Lun to Strider alone. How did he get there? Walking would have taken forever, and we've seen no sign that he ever had a horse or wagon. He couldn't possibly have afforded a car. So how the hell did he get from Lun to Strider, and then get his new bride from Strider back to Lun? Seems kind of nice, too, considering it's way too far away for Sarah's family to ever come visit.

Seriously, sounds like a promising match.

Let's go back to Sarah for a moment. Sarah is the youngest of four, and the only daughter of Corin and Merryn of Tremayne. Her older brother Corin is married to a man named Jack; Torpyn, the second oldest, married a woman named Eleanor of Lambrick, and after she died giving birth to their stillborn daughter, Berwinne, he killed himself with poison; William, the youngest son, drowned at thirteen. This leaves Sarah, rather conveniently, as the only descendent of Piran who can produce more royal blood descendents. Sarah is a pretty girl, and her excessive beauty is mentioned on several occasions by Darius. If you've ever been a fourteen-year-old girl, you know how stressful this time can be on your emotions and judgement. We have no reason to believe Harold was either attractive or unattractive, but let's just say he was a fairly good looker. Sarah claims it was "love at first sight" for the both of them, something I can believe a fourteen- and seventeen-year-old would think. We also have no idea how long Harold was in Strider, how long they courted (or if they courted at all), and when they married. Harold turned 17 on the 22nd day of Burning (July) in 1528, and Sarah was due to turn 15 the following Bear Moon (April). So, somewhere in between the very late summer to the following spring, Harold and Sarah met, fell in love, and married. I'm going to just assume it happened sometime in late summer or early autumn, since winter is not an ideal time to travel, and I don't see Harold leaving his home to stay with Sarah's family until spring. But that, again, is a lot of speculation, and there's no exact notion of how or when that all happened.

It seems a little weird to me that Harold wouldn't even question his wife's random disappearances, or her random changes in behavior. Sure, she was glamoured to look like she wasn't covered in bruises or whatever Darius did to her, but surely Harold would have thought something was up. Maybe he's just been a dummy for Darius all along. Though he did seem to care about Alicia and Daphne. He also was pretty distressed by Sarah's supposed death, too.

The point is, it's weird, and sketchy. What were the odds that this would happen so perfectly for Darius? Personally, I'd bet it had nothing to do with odds, and that Darius plotted it all along. She was pretty much the perfect candidate -- royal descent, but not formally recognized or known to the public; married to a man alongside the forest of Lun... too perfect, really.

Anyway, those are my thoughts.

Ly'ethil Gysse'lylth

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I have always felt bad for Ly. She's crazy and evil, but I felt bad for her anyway.

(No, I don't feel bad for Darius in the slightest.)

After spending the entire book vaguely painting her into a bitch, and then suddenly bringing her full-round as a complete psycho killer, I have somehow managed to make her into what I never thought possible -- a human being. (Okay, she's arthi'al technically, but roll with me here.) She is hardly insane, I'd say; twisted by dark magic, surely, but not naturally insane. Spiteful, vindictive, hateful, jealous -- yes, she is all those things. But her infatuation with death and puppets was not something she would have naturally turned to without a very big push. Hence, Darius.


The lovely but deadly Ly'ethil Gysse'lylth

I'm personally quite surprised with how this has turned out. I never planned for or even expected Ly to be anything more than an evil murderess consumed by an overwhelming hatred of her sister, spawning mainly from Farol choosing Mal instead of Ly. And yet here she is, a woman numbed by the things she has done, resigned in her fate, and empty inside. They say the moments before death are when one's true self is revealed, and she understands well that she will die soon, and is finally okay with that, because she realizes that she's wasted her entire life, and there is no hope for redemption for her. She still intends to kill Mal, but she knows she will derive no pleasure from it because, though her entire life has been built up for this moment, there is simply no point to it. She's done, and she's ready to leave the world forever.

In a twisted sort of way, Ly's want to bring Mal with her to the other world is a form of protection. As a young child, before and after their mother abandoned them, Ly was fiercely protective of her baby sister, who adored her. This passion for Mal continued throughout Ly's life, as Ly struggled with her own conflicted emotions and motives, choosing to take the path with the least pain and choosing to feel no guilt for her actions. Ly's final crime would be too much for Mal to handle, and Ly understands that it would be better for her baby sister to die ignorant. Of course, things do not turn out that way, but it really sheds a different light on Ly.

Perhaps readers will understand and see Ly as the empty and tormented soul she is, and not simply the image on the surface. Perhaps they will feel bad for her, as I do. Perhaps they will not pity her, because she deserves to feel this way after all the horrible crimes she has committed. Who knows. What I know, though, is that Ly is a person like everyone else, and while seriously misguided, and having done many unforgivable things, she deserves this chance to show the world that she is, in fact, a human being. (Again, figuratively.)

Or maybe I'm just insane. What do you think?

100,000 words.

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I did it. I really, really did it. I wrote 50,000 words (exactly) in thirty days. HOW THE HELL DID THAT HAPPEN???!! I am so amazed with myself. I can't believe it.

Thirty days ago, my story was a measly little thing. I really hadn't gone anywhere with it. I'd spent the month of October trying to catch it up to 50k words so that I could reach 100k, but the story was still not even halfway finished. To be exact, it was 40% of the way finished. Thirty days of blood, sweat, and tears later, amongst a huge and intensive semester-long group project, daily homework, two research papers, occasional starvation, and other nonsensical college woes, I have somehow managed, in many late nights spent typing and laughing with my friend John until 4 in the morning while he read what I'd already written, to reach my goal and emerge successful. I feel like I'm a fucking superhero. I wonder how I'll feel in fourteen days when I'm done with the damn thing.

Chapter 20, oh, Chapter 20...

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So, I wrote the entire last half of chapter twenty, "The Puppetmaster," listening to a loop of "Be Prepared," Scar's song from The Lion King. Yes, I know. XD

Anyway, this chapter is FUCKED UP!! D: Some really terrible things are revealed, even worse things happen, and basically I ended the chapter feeling thoroughly disgusted and extremely sad. It's completely thrown a major emotional and plot twist in the way of everything, and I've completely traumatized my poor friend John who has been reading diligently with every new chapter update. And the events of chapter 21 feel so unimportant now that XYZ happened. ...sigh...

I can't believe what happened. I was definitely not prepared, and I almost cried. I'm seriously in mourning right now.

Maybe I'm not gonna die, after all

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Way to go, me! Last night I really put myself in gear and wrote over 1,000 words in an hour. Since then, today I have written 2,000 or so more words, putting me at a total of 3,481 words today, at this exact moment. I'm 31 words away from yesterday's word count of 43,333, and earlier today I kicked Friday's word count of 41,666 in the ass. Tomorrow I need to be at 46,666. I am going to continue to write like batshit crazy today and see if I can't hit that goddamn 45,000 that I'm supposed to be at by today's end. I've gone from being predicted to finish on December 3rd to December 1st, which is the standard you get every morning if you're following the proper schedule, which switches to November 30th after you write the day's count. I'm so fuckin' excited. :D

There are only four more days left of NaNoWriMo. Tomorrow there will only be three. As of right now, I have to write 6,698 more words by 11:59 on Wednesday to hit 50k and win this shit.

BRING IT THE FUCK ON.

Roughly 13 pages behind

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So do y'all remember how last time I posted I said I was catching up at a gwormmy's pace? Looks like I'm just being downright lazy now. I'm about 5,000 words behind, or about 13 pages. When I look at it that way, it seems an impossible task. I don't know how I'm going to do it.

Luckily, my roommates don't arrive till tomorrow, so I have all night to myself, though I kind of wanted some sleep. I was going to write until 10 and then settle in for some good ole Alice in Wonderland 2010, but I just won't be getting around to that it seems. I'll write for another hour or two, then hit the hay. I wanna get up in time for some b-fast. Cafeteria stops serving it at 10ish, isn't that ridiculous?? Hopefully it'll be open, or I'll have to make do with *shudder* microwaveable oatmeal instead of the real shit I get in the cafeteria. *faints*

I'm gonna die.

Catching up at a gwormmy's pace

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Okay, so last week was totally insane. I had two research papers to do and lots of other homework and stuff. I really didn't have time to do my word count, and so I sacrificed a couple of days for homework's sake. Well, I've been working hard to get caught up to speed, but it's really slow going. I was 5,000 words behind the day's count a couple days ago, then like 4,000, and I'm about 3,000 today, though I hit 35,000 last night, two days late. I'm supposed to get to 38,333 today, and then 40,000 tomorrow; we'll see how that goes.

Not much else to say here but that. My characters have taken really funky turns and I'm basically just riding along with the story, not really sure of what's going to happen next. I should draft out a little plan just so I know exactly how I'm spacing stuff.

HALFWAY.

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That's right everypony, you heard correctly -- I have finally passed the halfway mark in Mal'ethil!! OMG, this is such an achievement! I never dreamed I'd actually get this far, and here's the reality!!!

I've written at least 3700 words today, and I'm still writing, as I'm pretty addicted to my book right now. It's one in the morning and I'm about 870 words away from tomorrow's Nano word count-- meaning, the word count due on November 14th. I've also finished the rough draft for my research paper for English, which is another MASSIVE accomplishment; it'll be even better when I finish my Gen Ed focus paper tomorrow (easy as pie) and EVEN better when it's Friday and I've turned in both completed, shiny papers, and am packing to head home Saturday for Thanksgiving break. On top of all of this, I also beat Madness Returns tonight, so I'm pretty much on a fuckin' roll. Life is pretty fantabulous at the moment; this is a great month for me.

Mal'ethil will be finished by Christmas, and I'll be able to print out a copy for my mother and and another for my grandmother and wrap them up as Christmas presents. I'm not sure what I'll do after I've finished Mal'ethil; it'll likely be a bittersweet ending and I'll be at a loss for a while since I've been working on this for so long. Maybe I'll flesh out and start working on The Skylands. Who knows? I do want to get Mal'ethil published, and as soon as I possibly can, so I can get a real copy of the book, see it in the bookstore, and give my grandmother the first copy. I want her to see it published before she dies; she's going to be 94 in February, and while she's healthy, it's all really up in the air at this age. I'll just keep praying, I suppose! Though it's going to be tough finding an agent. Once I snag one, though, it's all pretty easy on my part from then on. My mom says I don't need an agent, but, let's be real. No publishing house will ever glance at something not delivered by some known agent.

Anyway, that's my big news for today! Hopefully the rest of the semester will go as smoothly. :)

Chapter 15; 11,601 words since Tuesday

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So I just finished chapter 14 and I'm at 11,601 words; still got about 65 more words left for today's count, but I mean, that's like 3 sentences.

What happened in chapter 14? Well, we got to check out the year 1306 for a little (1778 our time) bit and see Ly get completely flat-out rejected. Then we jumped into 1541 (2013 our time) and woke up to Alicia screaming her head off - why? Her mind-reading powers have kicked in! So she goes half-insane hearing basically the entire town of Trelawney's thoughts without being able to turn it off. Luckily, Mal and Warwing take her up in the sky out of range, and Mal helps her learn to turn it on and off. Then, a couple months later, Alicia makes her first friend!! Her name's Mazey, and she talks nonstop. Mal wonders that perhaps it's' time for her to make some friends, too.

Chapter 15, who knows what gonna happen?? I'm thinking Alicia will go through puberty, and the bulk of her teen years, get her to perhaps 16, have some more powers kick in... and then chapter 16 could end with the prologue, with the world being thrown into shadow; though I may have to make that 17. But I'll strive for 16, so I can start Book 2 already and be officially halfway done.

YAY!

At 5,026 words

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Well, so as the big title suggests, I am at 5,026 words as of roughly three minutes ago. It's my third day in a row of keeping up with my word count! :D This is impressive, as I normally fall short even from the get-go. So, that's good, at least I don't have to worry about that anymore today, and I've gotten it out of the way.

Now I just have to get going for a science review for my exam tomorrow, ugh D: and then do some research for my formal proposal for a paper in English (double UGH D:). ... I'm gonna be up late again. Greeeeat.

At least tomorrow's finally Friday!!